Thursday, 2 August 2012

ODE

Dear rabbit(doll)
  Hello rabbit! It's me. Iris Park, your owner. You should know me, of course. I'm writing this letter to you to say sorry, and thank you. It's the first letter I'm writng to you, so don't rip it when you read this.

  First of all I want to say sorry about stuffing you into my toy basket for months. You must have felt really distracted. And in winter, that room was the coldest, in summer it was the hotest place in our house. When I found you, you looked really tanned and old.

 Second, even though I treated you like this, you helped me all the time. When I fought with my friends, I was crying in bed. You were the only one who comforted me. You always listens to my story very well. You don't say anything, but it seems like you are understanding me really much. I got lots of help from that. Also you congratulated me when I was happy. I was happy because I won the basketball game. Even my cousin brother didn't congratulate me. You did it, so I was very happy. And I'm really sorry that I hit you when I'm angry. You are very soft and cushiony, I can'y help it.

 Now I'll promise things to you. Well I took you to this camp. That was one of my promise. Next one is that I will never stuff you into my room again! You will be always sitting on my bed. mabye desk, too. Last, I'll be the best owner. I'll never trash you. If you get ripped, I'll fix you instead of buying a new one. I'll always take a very good care of you. Bye^^

 From Park Hye Rin.

2 comments:

  1. It's sweet that you brought your bunny to the camp. I also have a 20 year old monkey doll but I didn't bring it to this camp. Overall, your ode is very emotional and I can very well feel your love toward your bunny. Good job!

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  2. Good writing! Some small mistakes - but nothing serious. Very good descriptions of your furry friend.

    You have one very good post finished, so try and catch up and get more done. Fighting!

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