1. First, I want to tell you about my family. Our family member is my mother, father, and me. Mother has been playing piano and teaching piano. But now she doesn't. Still, she plays the piano very well. She is a very good cook.Also she is very nice and funny. My father works at Samsung. He is a very busy worker. It's hard to see him, because he goes to work early and comes back late. He is kind of quiet.
2. Second, I want to tell you about my favorite pet. My favorite pet is a dog. His name is 'Cookie'. He is a very active dog. He is a Maltiz. He likes playing fetch. I have to throw the ball every time he comes with the ball. Sometimes, if I don't play with him, he rips off my homework. His punishment is to be put inside his cage. He goes inside and can't come out until I open the door for him.
This was about Park Hye Rin. Bye~
Hi Hyerin. So after reading this, I got to know you better. There is nothing particularly wrong but there were some grammatical errors that should be changed to "at Samsung", "He is a Maltiz" and "rips off". Otherwise, not bad! :)
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